From 9e4cc26312f14447b495a7db49b4c876131148e0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: tkrokli Date: Fri, 19 Feb 2016 15:03:21 +0100 Subject: [3.3.5] Core/Logs: English text corrections This is an attempt to proofread standard error messages and system messages from both core and DB. The corrections span typos, grammar and punctuation. Because some of these messages can have multiple meanings depending on context, this PR will stay in "WIP" status until the corrections have been validated and approved. You are welcome to suggest improvements and files not yet included in this list. Thanks to @Kinzcool for suggesting this line of work. :) --- src/server/scripts/Commands/cs_character.cpp | 12 ++++++------ src/server/scripts/Commands/cs_send.cpp | 10 +++++----- src/server/scripts/Commands/cs_titles.cpp | 2 +- 3 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) (limited to 'src/server/scripts/Commands') diff --git a/src/server/scripts/Commands/cs_character.cpp b/src/server/scripts/Commands/cs_character.cpp index e048aabd4d7..eb1aa98f4ff 100644 --- a/src/server/scripts/Commands/cs_character.cpp +++ b/src/server/scripts/Commands/cs_character.cpp @@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ public: info.name = fields[1].GetString(); info.accountId = fields[2].GetUInt32(); - // account name will be empty for not existed account + // account name will be empty for nonexisting account AccountMgr::GetName(info.accountId, info.accountName); info.deleteDate = time_t(fields[3].GetUInt32()); foundList.push_back(info); @@ -169,11 +169,11 @@ public: if (!handler->GetSession()) handler->PSendSysMessage(LANG_CHARACTER_DELETED_LIST_LINE_CONSOLE, - itr->guid.GetCounter(), itr->name.c_str(), itr->accountName.empty() ? "" : itr->accountName.c_str(), + itr->guid.GetCounter(), itr->name.c_str(), itr->accountName.empty() ? "" : itr->accountName.c_str(), itr->accountId, dateStr.c_str()); else handler->PSendSysMessage(LANG_CHARACTER_DELETED_LIST_LINE_CHAT, - itr->guid.GetCounter(), itr->name.c_str(), itr->accountName.empty() ? "" : itr->accountName.c_str(), + itr->guid.GetCounter(), itr->name.c_str(), itr->accountName.empty() ? "" : itr->accountName.c_str(), itr->accountId, dateStr.c_str()); } @@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ public: */ static void HandleCharacterDeletedRestoreHelper(DeletedInfo const& delInfo, ChatHandler* handler) { - if (delInfo.accountName.empty()) // account not exist + if (delInfo.accountName.empty()) // account does not exist { handler->PSendSysMessage(LANG_CHARACTER_DELETED_SKIP_ACCOUNT, delInfo.name.c_str(), delInfo.guid.GetCounter(), delInfo.accountId); return; @@ -660,7 +660,7 @@ public: if (newCharName.empty()) { - // Drop not existed account cases + // Drop nonexisting account cases for (DeletedInfoList::iterator itr = foundList.begin(); itr != foundList.end(); ++itr) HandleCharacterDeletedRestoreHelper(*itr, handler); } @@ -810,7 +810,7 @@ public: if (levelStr && isalpha(levelStr[0])) { nameStr = levelStr; - levelStr = NULL; // current level will used + levelStr = NULL; // current level will be used } Player* target; diff --git a/src/server/scripts/Commands/cs_send.cpp b/src/server/scripts/Commands/cs_send.cpp index 672db3a3ab0..31544543426 100644 --- a/src/server/scripts/Commands/cs_send.cpp +++ b/src/server/scripts/Commands/cs_send.cpp @@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ public: std::string subject = msgSubject; std::string text = msgText; - // from console show not existed sender + // from console, use non-existing sender MailSender sender(MAIL_NORMAL, handler->GetSession() ? handler->GetSession()->GetPlayer()->GetGUID().GetCounter() : 0, MAIL_STATIONERY_GM); /// @todo Fix poor design @@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ public: } } - // from console show not existed sender + // from console show nonexisting sender MailSender sender(MAIL_NORMAL, handler->GetSession() ? handler->GetSession()->GetPlayer()->GetGUID().GetCounter() : 0, MAIL_STATIONERY_GM); // fill mail @@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ public: { if (Item* item = Item::CreateItem(itr->first, itr->second, handler->GetSession() ? handler->GetSession()->GetPlayer() : 0)) { - item->SaveToDB(trans); // save for prevent lost at next mail load, if send fail then item will deleted + item->SaveToDB(trans); // Save to prevent being lost at next mail load. If send fails, the item will be deleted. draft.AddItem(item); } } @@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ public: std::string subject = msgSubject; std::string text = msgText; - // from console show not existed sender + // from console show nonexisting sender MailSender sender(MAIL_NORMAL, handler->GetSession() ? handler->GetSession()->GetPlayer()->GetGUID().GetCounter() : 0, MAIL_STATIONERY_GM); SQLTransaction trans = CharacterDatabase.BeginTransaction(); @@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ public: if (!msgStr) return false; - ///- Check that he is not logging out. + /// - Check if player is logging out. if (player->GetSession()->isLogingOut()) { handler->SendSysMessage(LANG_PLAYER_NOT_FOUND); diff --git a/src/server/scripts/Commands/cs_titles.cpp b/src/server/scripts/Commands/cs_titles.cpp index 2f5d7b8364c..6309e7279c9 100644 --- a/src/server/scripts/Commands/cs_titles.cpp +++ b/src/server/scripts/Commands/cs_titles.cpp @@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ public: if (CharTitlesEntry const* tEntry = sCharTitlesStore.LookupEntry(i)) titles2 &= ~(uint64(1) << tEntry->bit_index); - titles &= ~titles2; // remove not existed titles + titles &= ~titles2; // remove non-existing titles target->SetUInt64Value(PLAYER__FIELD_KNOWN_TITLES, titles); handler->SendSysMessage(LANG_DONE); -- cgit v1.2.3